Wow lots of information on Ireland - I want to go there. You did a great job finding a lot of interesting facts about many places you want to visit. You also did a nice job finding pictures that went well with your topic and writing your scripts. Good introduction. Wonderful job saving project, uploading to YouTube and posting it on your blog - there are a lot of steps to this project and you did a nice job completing them.
Where you can improve: Volume was too low on voice recording. I had to strain to hear what you had to say and this was at home with no other noise competing for my attention. -5. Organization problems in spots. -5. Some images didn't match speech in a few spots. -2 stumbled on speaking in a few spots - practice before recording helps with this.
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ReplyDeleteWow lots of information on Ireland - I want to go there. You did a great job finding a lot of interesting facts about many places you want to visit. You also did a nice job finding pictures that went well with your topic and writing your scripts. Good introduction.
Wonderful job saving project, uploading to YouTube and posting it on your blog - there are a lot of steps to this project and you did a nice job completing them.
Where you can improve:
Volume was too low on voice recording. I had to strain to hear what you had to say and this was at home with no other noise competing for my attention. -5. Organization problems in spots. -5. Some images didn't match speech in a few spots.
-2 stumbled on speaking in a few spots - practice before recording helps with this.
Overall you did a very nice job 88% B